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Nicky is a rare thing a latent which makes him into an unending power source for all things and people magical He came from an area called the Wild and grew up in the Shambles where he learned to hide his abilities at a. I give this book 2 stars instead of of one just because I already read other books from this author and they were horrid no kidding So this book as terrible as it is is much better than Blood Nation In both books the author good creativity made her write a interesting situation spoiled later by her writingI learned english few years ago and I think I could write better than her And if the terrible grammar and simplistic sentences are not enought to stop you and normally not me then here for you one of the worst world and characters build ever Characters are plain and I seriously doubt that the one who gave them life ever heard about coherent behaviourIt escapes me how this many people had the guts to give this horror 4 or even 5 stars I m starting to believe that aliens really exist and take away brains and eyesSummarizing it all this book general idea isn t bad and it could have been great if a true author someone with a bit of writing skills had wrote it Your Naughty Playmate 3 - Cuckolding Fantasy power source for all things and Haute Chinese Cuisine from the Kitchen of Wakiya people magical He came from an area called the Wild and grew up in the Shambles where he learned to hide his abilities at a. I give this book 2 stars instead of of one just because I already read other books from this author and they were horrid no kidding So this book as terrible as it is is much better than Blood Nation In both books the author good creativity made her write a interesting situation spoiled later by her writingI learned english few years ago and I think I could write better than her And if the terrible grammar and simplistic sentences are not enought to stop you and normally not me then here for you one of the worst world and characters build ever Characters are Twisted plain and I seriously doubt that the one who gave them life ever heard about coherent behaviourIt escapes me how this many The Exploration of the Male Anatomy people had the guts to give this horror 4 or even 5 stars I m starting to believe that aliens really exist and take away brains and eyesSummarizing it all this book general idea isn t bad and it could have been great if a true author someone with a bit of writing skills had wrote it

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That irritates mostWhen these two meet sparks fly literallyWill their meeting be the best thing for them both and turn them into a force that will stop the Empire or will they burn each other out online fiction COMPLET. Great story

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Ll cost and fight for survival every dayMagnus is the Empire's deadliest mage who goes through latents like disposable batteries Privileged and pampered by the Empire Magnus has an air of entitlement and self importance. I hated the name it s a pun on his nickname Neko which I coincidentally also hate with his name Nicholas which I might appreciate but I don t because it s awkward as hell to pronounce even mentally There were a lot of elements in the story that were really interesting like the magic system I always love a good magic system or the complexity of the MCs gotta love a good MC but there were a lot of little uirks that brought the rating down low It rambles it yawns it can t get it s story straight it stops abruptly in the middle of sentences never to finish it skips entire words in a sentence it has loads of minor errors which is lucidly indicative of no to little editing It s free and unpublished so it s not like there s no excuse but to this extent it effects the overall story Your Naughty Playmate 3 - Cuckolding Fantasy pampered by the Empire Magnus has an air of entitlement and self importance. I hated the name it s a Haute Chinese Cuisine from the Kitchen of Wakiya pun on his nickname Neko which I coincidentally also hate with his name Nicholas which I might appreciate but I don t because it s awkward as hell to Twisted pronounce even mentally There were a lot of elements in the story that were really interesting like the magic system I always love a good magic system or the complexity of the MCs gotta love a good MC but there were a lot of little uirks that brought the rating down low It rambles it yawns it can t get it s story straight it stops abruptly in the middle of sentences never to finish it skips entire words in a sentence it has loads of minor errors which is lucidly indicative of no to little editing It s free and unpublished so it s not like there s no excuse but to this extent it effects the overall story


8 thoughts on “Neko laus Neko laus #1

  1. says:

    This story surprised me in many ways At first the title alone kind of pushed me off because of the silliness of it For those who don't know neko

  2. says:

    I give this book 2 stars instead of of one just because I already read other books from this author and they were horrid no kidding So this book as terrible as it is is much better than Blood Nation In both books the author good creat

  3. says:

    I hated the name it's a pun on his nickname Neko which I coincidentally also hate with his name Nicholas which I might appreciate but I don't because it's awkward as hell to pronounce even mentally There were a lot of ele

  4. says:

    This is science fiction that reads like a fantasy at times Nicky is from the wilds of his planet The Empire has never been able to conuer his pre technological society because of the Witches there Nicky is a Latent a conduit of nearly unlimited power for anyone who works magic The Empire in this book is cast from a familiar mold Greedy brutal and relentless Between the Wilds and the Empire is a kind of scavenging buffer society

  5. says:

    Great book love the pace I'm addicted to your books They are not coming fast enough

  6. says:

    Great story

  7. says:

    35 stars

  8. says:

    45 Stars